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| Banned Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Harrow, London, England.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Request primarily to Moderators, but also members... I'd very much like some feedback/critique on my journal. There are a lot of good brains on this site, but so far, only two comments, albeit good ones. I know it's a longish journal already, but it's not just dry BB'ing stats, rather a snapshot of my life in general - and you KNOW it's got my entertaining writing style down!! ![]() So whenever you get a chance please gents (and ladies too!), put the kettle on, sit down with a cup of steaming Java, and have a walk through. Even if you have negative comments that come to mind, PLEASE MAKE THEM. I don't like sugarcoating, it does the world a disservice because it only keeps the oversensitive from improving. I'm not thin-skinned, in fact I need hard, raw criticism just as much as encouraging feedback. I can't optimize my efforts unless I have the honest truth from the broadest possible cross-section of my peers. Lastly - there may be quite a few members who don't know where the Journal section is to visit - top of the page, series of links across the page, 3rd from left is 'Journals'. Thanks in advance, KS |
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| UK-Muscle Moderator and NABBA Champion Join Date: Jan 2005
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | i will take a look at some point over the weekend mate...and don't worry i don't sugercoat things ![]()
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| My name is EARL Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: On my bloody bike doing cardio
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Hey KS OOPS, sorry KS I did say I would be your journal buddy but didn't really do my 'homework' all that well for this comp! I do need to sort out what I am doing! Met this really nice NABBA figure girl backstage tonight, and I completely forgot about thinking about the FINALS, which would really change few of my plans for Comps! LOL I am a space cadet at times! Maybe another season with PECs rather than 'breast'. Heard today as well that in the 'golden era' female BBers were marked down for fake breasts, even padding in the bikinis! Also for tattoos! :canada: |
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| Wondering how people have the time to do all this over-complicating | you dont want things sugar coated? ok here goes. as seems to be the style of your posts nowadays you seem to go round the houses before you get to what you need to say. by this time everyone has fallen asleep/killed themselves/died of natural causes. keep it short because you are boring. keep it to talk about bodybuilding, we dont care if you havent cleared the lawnmower from your shed and the only reason you dont squat properly is because you dont want your bum anywhere near the cold floor. dont be such a sissy and get on with it. now shut up and get back to your shed and dont come out til you can squat properly just kidding keyser find your journal makes good reading actually
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